SGSari sketch- BW- Redraw

Redraw of:
 

I spent the last few hours on it since I finished most of my schoolwork earlier. I liked what +Speedygal said in my critique earlier and applied it.

Note: At this point, I think SG Sari looks better without the ponytails (Believe me, I TRIED to incorporate them but they refused to work with me) That, and I have a personal preference without them... Do you agree?

I kept mostly black and white, but couldn't resist making certain things glow. I have a weakness for glowy effects, sue me.